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First, an Ending

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I’ve been thinking about what to do to speed up my writing. Every writer does, I’m sure. My own plans, as ephemeral and unstated as they are, involve a lot of speed, but more than speed, we cannot waste time. As per our previous criteria, of course.

If we are going to do some design work on the story before drafting (more soon), it is best to start with the ending.

That doesn’t necessarily mean write the ending first or know exactly how it ends. Instead, we should know what the end is and, most of the time, why it ends that way. What will be the final climax, what will be the general resolution, and when will the story stop? We need to know that last one most of all. Unless we begin at the creation of the universe and end at the last gasps of entropy, there is always more before the start and more after the end. There may be more before and after even then.

What we want to know is where the goal post is. Our job is now to reach that spot. In the first story I’m preparing to publishing serialized, I know what the final battle is. I know who is fighting, who will win, and why. How, I don’t know yet, and considering the contenders, it will be one insane pile of ridiculousness. But that’s the end of the story. That’s the final climax before things come to an end. I would hope it’s at least entertaining.

I know what the stopping point is, and despite that distance (god help me it is very, very far off), it feels real. I can imagine stories about what happens afterwards, and other things that could be said, but the narrative as a whole has a nice, clean, final moment there.

Knowing the the ending means I know what the arc of the people involved in that ending will be. After all, I have to bring the two combatants to that point, and if I have any idea what they are like, I know what kind of events and ideas will have to strike them to get them ready for the showdow.

And now, knowing that arc tells me where I need to begin it: I need a point where all the interesting parts of the arc come after, but as much of the boring stuff is before. With that, I now have the whole story. To end here, with this arc, starting at this point. The middle may be mushy and muddled, but that’s going to leave room to grow.

One could also work the other direction, and after starting with the ending, first decide the beginning. We want to reach that climax: where is the most impactful and emotional moment where we could start from? What starting point gives us the most to work with to drive home what we want to say to get to that ending? With that, we simple draw in a path between the points that seems interesting.

I’ve said before we’re not here to be literary, but a good story involves themes, foreshadowing, and grand ideas implied and explicitly shown through metaphor and symbolism. Hey look, foreshadowing involves knowing where the ending is, and then putting in moments earlier on that reference that. We can do that now. Themes and ideas and symbolism? If we know where to end, we know the climax. That will almost certainly push forward some ideas. Why this person wins the final showdown over the other really does capture a lot of what I want to say. So I will say those things a lot. We almost look literary.

Of course if we wrote the whole story first, we would be in the same boat. We could include all those things knowing full well where we’re going. But serials don’t have that luxury. We need to get the first section right before even thinking about writing the fifth, let alone the last. Besides, why not save ourselves more revision work? Build the ideas in earlier.

I know this works for me, and I understand how that isn’t exactly going to work for everyone. But there is another, small scale value to this. To use a fighting example again, I never want to sit down to write a conflict anymore without knowing who wins. It’s a failsafe: if I know the winner but they can’t pull it out, that’s going to set off warning flags immediately. Did I overlook something? Is the reason they’re going to win not powerful enough? Or does what I think happen in the story conflict with my more subconscious understanding of the story? Sometimes I’m wrong. But deciding first, and then watching my own reactions turns my unconscious from bias to tool.

More on that, too, in a bit.

Track

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All right, we’re writing, we’re reading, and we know why we are here. It’s a good start. So lets jump into something else.

Track your numbers.

You want to write faster? You want to publish more? You want higher quality? You want better control over your ideas? Sure, that’s great. Can it be measured? Because if we can measure it, we can see it change over time. And if we can see it change over time, we can experiment.

That’s the whole purpose of this exercise. Numbers don’t tell the whole story, but as long as they remain reasonable and honest, they can be useful. As always, this is not the silver bullet, this is the next tool in our toolbox to make things better. As for things like “writing was pleasant today,” I have serious doubts if it’s worthwhile for testing or experimenting. It’s too fuzzy.

(Quick caveat: I think personal observations can be good, too, but more for stress/mood management. If you are quite the #artiste#, critically important, but not what we’re looking at today.)

Remember our goals: quality, consistency, and sustainability. The numbers we track have to have meaning, and they need to be recorded over and over and over. That sustainability is the most important, as missing them will devalue the entire project.

So start small. We’ll examine a whole bunch today, but just choose one, especially at the beginning. Get used to it, get the systems for it in place, and then add on more. I am no savant; I have a whole stack of data I want to start collecting, but just can’t handle right now. Fewer, reliable numbers always outweigh a stack of unreliable ones.

The most important and the easiest is #word count#. When we sit down to write, at the end, we should record how many words we have written. Accuracy counts, but depending on circumstances, it can vary slightly and often does from any particular “true” count, especially if we use different systems to count at different times. But if we keep consistent, and we don’t fret about a +- 20 word spread, it’s accurate enough.

We only compare counts to ourselves.

Let me repeat that.

We only compare counts to ourselves.

Some of the greatest writers of all time are famous for tiny word counts. Hemingway, as one of my English teachers reminded us #with pride#, wrote 500 words a day on average. There are numerous writers, both past and present, of all levels of literariness, who hit between 5000-10,000 a day.

It doesn’t matter.

I write faster than most people, but I’ve got a high 70s wpm typing speed. And I ramble. I end up with too much, mostly garbage, which makes editing hell. Hemingway did five hundred good words a day. I don’t agree with that idea, but it clearly worked for him, so I can’t really say anything.

The word count to does a few things: we know how many days we actually sit down to write. We can see the zero days, and counter them. If there is a day where the count is particularly high or low, we can look for causes. And, if we are training to write faster, graphing the averages can show us if the training is actually working.

Next, I’ve been tracking the #starting and ending editing word count# going in and coming out of editing. I want to cut a minimum of 10%, if not 25% or more, whenever I sit to edit. Knowing where I started and where I ended keeps me aware of that.

That’s me, however, and I have years of knowing how I write to look back on and see how my drafts always turn out. I try to cut back, but in some cases we need to add in to thin spots. The first few times, record it, but don’t think about it. Focus on what makes better writing, and then, see if that has a pattern. If we’re doing multiple edits, another good strategy I’ve learned recently is to do a primary edit by cutting as much as possible, and then backfill with more detail as needed.

I’ve started #dating# whenever I sit down to do work on a draft, edit, or prepare it for posting. It’s quick, it helps me keep track of the numbers above, and there’s editing styles where knowing when we wrote it is useful. That one time I’ll need to know when I worked on a piece? I have that information now. I do multiple edits, each dated with start/end counts, as well as dating it when it’s posted.

One more quick one is #tracking what I’m listening to while writing#. Music and background sounds seem to affect my writing. I think we all have that sense, and I want to start building a data set for it. If I don’t listen to music, I list what I hear around me, even if it’s silence or people talking, to keep in habit.

And the last one, which I have been failing at — including during the draft and first edit (but not the second! [or the final, yay!]) — is to track #time spent writing#. If we know how long each stage takes, we can better schedule time. It also gives a powerful tool with our word counts: words per hour (WPH).

WPH standardizes our word counts, across days and across different writing session lengths. Some days, we only have ten minutes to write; seeing a count of 120 words surrounded by 1000 counts is frustrating, even knowing we had less time to do it in. If it took an hour to do 1000 words? 720 instead of 1000 is much less bad. And if the 1000 took two hours? 720 v 500. That’s worth investigating.

WPH can reveal lots: days we get distracted, or can’t really write fast, or passion suddenly knocking out a couple thousand words at once, or pressure pushing us past our normal limits… WPH and word count and time, all together, gives a much more nuanced view of how we write. It doesn’t tell us why, but it tells us something happened. WPH is also very sensitive; if there is a change, it will tend to show up. That can also make it hard to find the cause of such changes, so deliberate experiments and tests are more important to us when looking for changes here.

Most of all, having a large data set, for any of these, will help give us insight. That’s why we should start tracking , even if we aren’t working on “serious” projects yet. It takes time for the database to get built; start now.

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